EdT
Great to see this back
and yet more twists and turns. Cleo as the villein of the piece [or at least another one squabbling for the throne]. Caesarion as something of a simpleton, berated and bullied by his mother. Although he does have the sense to be cautious about combining the words Rome and king. Not to mention does she seriously think than even if the Romans would accept a king they would also tolerate the Egyptian practice of incest?
Also I wonder if Sextus isn't being a bit too trusting of Octavian? At the least leaving his brother could mean he becomes an hostage. More dangerous might be Octavian using his immaturity to manoeuvre him into some disaster that taints the Pompeyian position and hence boost his own status.
Furthermore it sounds like the two Brutii will become rivals. Which could cause complications. Although it could also become moot if Titus is too overconfident and mucks up his attempts to stop Sextus. he's being very rash relying on doing it himself although it sounds like he's adopting the wisest policy in facing superior forces. [Does however sound suspiciously like what Pompey tried OTL and that didn't work out
].
Steve