Clavis Angliae

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Chapter 2: 1216 and all that.


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“The French Dynasties of Outremer Isles: Norman, Plantagenet and Capetian.”
By David Locke

King John I Lackland sat on an unstable throne in 1214. The loss of almost all the Plantagenet lands in France except for Gascony and Armagnac in the south was a devastating blow to his legitimacy. For fifteen years England had been taxed dry to pay for John’s continental exploits, and well before the victory by Philippe at Saint Amand had been growing distrust between King John and the Barons of England. The failure of John in France, especially the loss of ancestral Normandy, angered his Barons. When John manipulated the current laws, including increasing scutage eleven times in his reign, they raged against him. To further finance his wars in France he instituted an income tax, which raised the astronomical amount of 70,000 pounds. And it was all for nought.

His actions against the Church, which resulted in his excommunication and then his submission, angered both the Barons and the English Clergy. But it was Philip’s victory at Saint Amand that turned the Barons against him. In early 1215 open rebellion broke out, and on the 10th of May a rebel army of Barons entered London. The gates of the city were opened to them, and the King was caught unaware. Many moderates, including Hubert de Burgh, also turned against him. Forced by the Barons King John met them at the field of Runnymede on the 15th of July, where he would sign the ‘Articles of the Barons’ (or the Barons Charter). The Barons articles consisted of many clauses that would give the Barons increased power, whilst controlling that of the Monarch. In many ways it was the successor of the Charter of Liberties, signed by King Henry I in the year 1100. The Baron’s Charter set out almost every aspect of feudal dues and rights in English society. John was alone against the Barons, and so he signed the Great Charter on the 15th of June. Four days later the Barons renewed their vows of fealty to King John.

No sooner had the ink dried on the vellum did John manoeuvre against the Barons. Once the Barons army had left London he renounced his signing of the Charter, claiming that he was forced to sign under duress. Civil War was unleashed upon England. Let us consider the barons who had brought John to Runnymede in 1215.

The men who opposed John were known as Boreales, or Aquilonares by the chroniclers, but despite the name the centre of the revolt lay in Essex and East Anglia, although of the twenty five barons who signed the Barons Charter a large proportion of them were from the north of England. The Boreales were for the most part a force of young men, and there where occasions where level headed older Barons supported Lackland, and their hot-headed sons stood against him. Many of the Boreales had a mixed record of disloyalty and failure, although many of their stories of personal wrongs inflicted by King John were fabricated. After the signing of the Barons Charter several leaders emerged:
Eustace de Vesci, lord of Alnwick. Robert Fitz Walter, lord of Dunmow in Essex. Saer de Quincy, Earl of Winchester. Fulk Fitz Warin, outlaw. Hubert de Burgh, the castellan who had fallen from the Kings grace.

Hubert de Burgh had risen to power in the household of Lacklands, but in June 1204 his fortunes changed. The castle of Chinon in Poitou had been placed under his command, to defend the Loire valley against the invasion by the French King Philip II. However through misfortune the castle lacked supplies for an extended siege, and de Burgh was forced to surrender the castle after a three month siege. When he returned to England in 1206 he was in disgrace. Lackland robbed him of almost all his land and titles, but granted him the shrievalty of Kent and Essex in 1210, when England was under Papal Interdiction. de Burgh brought to the Boreales not only the force of his name and men-at-arms, but also the promise of support from his father-in-law William de Vernon[1], Earl of Devon.

The rift between Lackland and de Burgh was never repaired. After the Battle of Saint Amand de Burgh rose in rebellion against King John. On Michaelmas [29th of September] - four months after Saint Amand – He publicly invited Simon ‘the Cathar-slayer’ de Montfort, who was on crusade against the Albigensians in the Languedoc to become King of England [2]. For this he was charged with treason.

Around King John gathered the older generation of earls, men such as William Marshal, (although his eldest two sons were supportive of the Boreales), the great mercenary Falkes de Breaute, Ranulf de Blondeville, Earl of Chester (Later 1st Earl of March). The Papal Legate Pandulph stood by him, as did Stephen Langton, Archbishop of Canterbury, despite the treachery of his brother Simon, Bishop of York.

In early 1215 the Boreales met at Stamford. It was a natural choice of location by the rebels, as it sat on the great north road, easily accessible by barons from the north and east. It would also have been a familiar location for many of the rebels, as it was a popular location for jousting tournaments. At Stamford Hubert de Burgh was appointed by the Boreales as their commander, ‘the marshal of the army of the Lord and Holy Church’[3].

War loomed, and both sides began to anticipate a long struggle. In April the rebellion began. From Stamford the army of the Boreales marched to Northampton and from there onto Brackley, where they renounced their homage to John I Lackland. They returned to Northampton from Brackley, and after laying siege to the castle for a fortnight without success they marched eastward to Bedford. John and the barons continued to negotiate whilst the Boreales army marched through the north.

On the 17th of May the Boreales leaders were secretly admitted into London. A fortnight earlier King John had granted London a favourable charter of rights, but this was ignored by the moderates of London, and the city was taken by the Boreales. London was the one great success by the Boreales in May, a face saving achievement after the failure at Northampton. But Hubert de Burgh knew that they could not succeed against John, and so reluctantly he sent an embassy to King Philip II of France (Who by this stage had acquired the title of Augustus) asking for help.

Philip agreed, eager to destroy the Plantagenets agreed. As King John attempted to make peace with the Boreales and meet the conditions of the Barons Charter, the French King prepared for war. In November a French army was prepared, as was an excuse for invasion. King Philip II proclaimed that John had been tried by the court of France in 1203 for the murder of Duke Arthur of Brittany. That court had condemned John to the loss of the English crown for his crime.

By 1216 John had seized the north and east, the areas that had rebelled against him, and the Boreales were confined to London. During the winter he had retaken the north, defeating a force by King Alexander II of Scotland in the Lowlands, and returned to the south through Lincolnshire. The affairs of the English government continued to run. The courts were continuous, as was the business of the chancellery. The rebel Boreales was trapped in the east of England, and yet the line between Lackland and Boreale territory was, as it would be during the rest of the civil war, blurry. London remained the single major town held by the Boreales, and King John was preparing to attack. [4]

In May the inevitable French invasion arrived. For almost a year King Philip had been preparing for war, and had sent two small forces of French knights across the Channel before the winter. However these knights gave little relief to the Boreales. Philip dispatched the pirate Eustace the Monk- who had been in his service for several years – charging him with protecting the French fleet and attacking that of Lackland. Eustace and his brothers would transfer the army of Lewis across the channel in May. A fleet of twenty one ships had been assembled at the Thames to combat the French fleet but were dispatched by a storm, and on the 21st of May the French prince landed on English soil at Thanet. Within a week he marched to London and was received by the Boreales. King John had been on the Kentish coast observing the movements of the French army, and on the advice of William Marshal he retreated to the old Saxon capitol of Winchester.

The effect of the French prince in the land cannot be underestimated. Gerald of Wales wrote that:

“The madness of slavery is over, the time of liberty has been granted, English necks are free from the yoke.”​

Castles were surrendered, town gates were opened, but above all there were numerous desertions and several great Earls, most importantly the Earl of Salisbury, William Longsword and Earl of Devon, William de Vernon [5]. In the area of London only Windsor and Dover remained loyal. The castle of Dover was under the command of Reginald de Cornhill, the High Sheriff of Surrey [6,7]. The castle was the key to England -the Clavis Angliae - and whoever held it would be in a very powerful position.

Upon arriving in London Lewis received King Alexander II of Scotland, who had made the dangerous journey across England to pay homage to the Prince [8], although at this state Lewis was not crowned as King in the cathedral, only proclaimed. In June he mustered his army and on the advice of de Burgh he marched to Dover. Like other nobles before him de Cornhill surrendered his castle to Prince Lewis on the 20th of June. Lewis then cowed the Cinque Ports, forcing them to swear their allegiance to him. Their loyalty would be questionable throughout the Civil War, and on August 27th King Philip issued a mandate to merchants of Poitou and Gascony ordering them to put into ports between the Isle of Wight and Bristol which are ‘not in the power of our enemies’.

After seizing Dover, Lewis marched west to take Winchester and Windsor. King John had left Winchester after hearing of the loss of Dover, and was heading north once more, into the Welsh marches to gather reinforcements. Lewis seized Winchester and Windsor after two long sieges, as both towns had large garrisons of knights, some one hundred at each. It took two long months for Lewis to take Winchester, but after it fell Windsor surrendered shortly after on the 2nd of October. [9]
After the fall of Windsor King Lewis met Earl William of Devon at Southampton on the 23rd of October, and aided the Earl with the capture of the Plantagenet stronghold. Lewis had brought a trebuchet from the continent, the first on English soil, and it was used to break the walls of Southampton [10].

In the north John found his army enlarged by the knights and men-at-arms of Chester and Hereford as he marched east into Lincolnshire. The castle of Lincoln itself had been held by Gilbert de Gant, and upon hearing word of the victory of the Boreales and Lewis at Dover, Winchester and Southampton, held the castle against John.

John lay siege to Lincoln castle. For all of October John sat outside Lincoln castle, attempting to starve de Gant out. He sent his agents across Lincolnshire to gather goods for the siege. As winter began, and on the advice of William Marshal and Ranulf de Blondeville, Earl of Chester – who had taken command of the midlands, and held them for Lackland – John broke the siege of Lincoln and marched north to York, a loyal Plantagenet stronghold amongst the lands of the Boreales. York had been seized the year earlier during John’s subjugation of the north, the rebellious Bishop Simon Langdon had been cast out. John’s progress was slow, hampered by the royal baggage train. John reached York on the 17th of October, and spent a sombre Christmas in the company of his few loyal men [11]. The bishops of Winchester, Chichester and Worcester, the Earls of Pembroke, Chester and Derby, and the papal legate Gualo and few others sat in attendance. This latter guest of Lackland was the most important, for the Plantagenets had few supporters outside of England, but amongst them was Pope Honorius III [12]. John had God on his side, and the Plantagenet soldiers wore the cross at the Siege of Lincoln [13], and Gualo had placed an Interdiction on the territory under Lewis’s control. However this Interdiction was contested by Lewis, and was not enforced.

During the winter the fighting declined, as was the nature of medieval warfare, and John sat in York and feasted. Spring returned, and John’s position was becoming desperate. He gathered his men in April, and marched south to take Lincoln. Lewis to had also prepared an army, made up of French and English with which he would strike at de Blondeville in the midlands. When he received word of the presence of John at Lincoln Lewis turned his army away from Nottingham and marched to north, to face John in open battle.

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[1] More commonly known as William de Redvers IOTL. Vernon was used IOTL on occasion (as he was from Vernon castle), and it is more common in TTL.

[2] In OTL in 1210 rumour reached King John that rebellious barons were planning to invite Simon ‘the Crusader’ de Montfort to sit on the English throne. It never amounted to anything, but he would be the natural choice to be invited to become King by de Burgh, who wouldn’t be that keen on a Capetian monarch.

[3] Robert Fitzwalter would have been given command of the rebels IOTL, but de Burgh is more competent and popular with the barons then Fitzwalter.

[4] For the record this all fairly similar to OTL.

[5] William de Vernon remained on the side of King John throughout the First Barons War. Also the name William seems to have been quite popular with nobles in the 12th and 13th Century, as it seems every noble and his son is named William. I blame King William I, the Bastard.

[6] IOTL the castle was under the command of Hubert de Burgh.

[7] IOTL Reginald was given control of Rochester Castle. In the absence of Hubert de Burgh Reginald was given control of Dover instead.

[8] Happened in OTL as well.

[9] Winchester has a slightly larger garrison then OTL.

[10] As a result Marlborough remains in the hands of the Plantagenets.

[11] IOTL John was able to seize Lincoln easily, as Gilbert de Gant abandoned the castle to him. However with the successes of Lewis and the Boreales in the south de Gant is rather unwilling to hand Lincoln over to John. With his success at Lincoln IOTL John attempted to go further south, but when he passed through to King’s Lynn, where he caught dysentery on the 9th of October. He continued to journey on, and on the 18th of October he died at Newark.

[12] Although the only other supporter is the Count of Flanders.

[13] Again, it happened IOTL as well. The Plantagenet forces at the OTL Battles of Lincoln and Sandwich wore the cross.

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Thoughts?
 

Thande

Donor
Nice work, Scarecrow.

I cannot promise not to do more de Burgh puns as the opportunity arises ;)

Maybe I'll see about putting fhaessig's translation into older English as he wants...
 
Good installment. It took me a while to recognize that "Prince Lewis" was Prince Louis of France. I am assuming that with Lewis/Louis having a reputation in England (due to the first installment) that his brothers acquire other powers due his repuation in Britain. If not, then where do they stand?
 
Excellent Scarecrow! Can't wait to see John get bitch-slapped. :D

aw, No love for Lackland?

Excellent. English culture's going to be very interesting.

It should be, especialy the King Arthur side of things. Language as well will be interesting.

Nice work, Scarecrow.

I cannot promise not to do more de Burgh puns as the opportunity arises ;)

Maybe I'll see about putting fhaessig's translation into older English as he wants...

That would be really helpful:)

Good instalment. It took me a while to recognise that "Prince Lewis" was Prince Louis of France. I am assuming that with Lewis/Louis having a reputation in England (due to the first instalment) that his brothers acquire other powers due his reputation in Britain. If not, then where do they stand?

Louis only has one brother IIRC, and an illegitimate one at that: Philip Hurepel. IOTL he was made Count of Clermont, Boulogne and other scraps of land. His fate and actions will be revealed at a later date.;)
 
Let's face it, Robin Hood was rewritten to have him as the bad guy. That's how much he was hated.

This is the point where I mention the old factoid about Robin Hood originally being a ballad to celebrate the Livery Guilds, and that we have committed the equivalent of preserving the Littlewoods Adverts as masterpieces of film...

[Robin Hood was noted as being extraordinarily heavy in descriptions of clothing, and Robin's clothing - Lincoln Graine, a shade of scarlet, which was translated as Lincoln Greene - was that of the well-dressed merchant. The original moral was "The triumph of the middle classes will lead to charity to the poor and the rich getting what they deserve!"]

EDIT: Good TL, scarecrow! Can't wait to see Lackland get his arse handed to him even more than OTL - that guy is a multiversal punching bag. :D
 
Very nice Scarecrow.
Methinks we'll hear more from de Montfort...

Ah, I'm glad someone caught that. Simon de Montfort the elder was too cool a character to do nothing with. There has been another couple of hints dropped that are yet to be commented on.

This is the point where I mention the old factoid about Robin Hood originally being a ballad to celebrate the Livery Guilds, and that we have committed the equivalent of preserving the Littlewoods Adverts as masterpieces of film...

[Robin Hood was noted as being extraordinarily heavy in descriptions of clothing, and Robin's clothing - Lincoln Graine, a shade of scarlet, which was translated as Lincoln Greene - was that of the well-dressed merchant. The original moral was "The triumph of the middle classes will lead to charity to the poor and the rich getting what they deserve!"]

EDIT: Good TL, scarecrow! Can't wait to see Lackland get his arse handed to him even more than OTL - that guy is a multiversal punching bag. :D

That's very interesting info Nek. As for Robin Hood ITTL, there is already an OTL character William of Cassingham who lead a guerrilla warfare campaign against Prince Louis IOTL, using the Weald for his base.
 
Chapter 3: Outremer

Chapter 3: Outremer

Have mercy, Jesus! I did but dream.
- supposed last words of King John I Lackland of England

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“The Lions of God: The Plantagenet Dynasty.”
By John Mauvoisin

By April 1217 John was a shadow of his former glory. Chased north by the advancing army of King Lewis and the Boreales from their base at London, King John spent the winter at York, and was described as a ‘caged lion’. In January he received word from the Earl of Ulster, Hugh de Lacy. Hugh was loyal to King John, and suggested to Lackland that should England turn against him then he could escape to Ireland, to continue the fight. [1] John was not eager to leave England, as he saw it as a sign of his weakness. He decided instead to send his wife and five children [2] to Ireland for safety, as there were few fortresses under the command of the Plantagenets in England that was not under threat from the Boreales or King Lewis [3]. Before they left John had his eldest son Henry knighted and made Lord of Ireland. His mother and William Marshal would be regents for young Henry until he reached his majority (as he was ten years old at the time). The Lacklands set off from York on the 13th of February, arriving in Lancaster a week later. The Lackland family’s journey in the ship Gods Grace across the Irish Sea is often been compared to that of the Blanche Nef [4] of almost a century earlier. The great English scholar Doctor Miribilis [5], educator of John II and Academic wrote that:

“It would have been far better for the Capetians had the Gods Grace befallen the same fate as the Blanche Nef.”

They were in Dublin for Easter, before journeying north to the castle of Carrickfergus in the Earldom of Ulster. Built by John of Courcy in the 1180’s it was the very model of the Norman castle, and far safer then the port of Dublin, which was raided by a fleet from Bristol during the short stay there by the Lacklands.

In the south Lewis rarely stayed in the one place. After taking Windsor, Winchester and Southampton Lewis returned to France to gain support and further knights and men at arms. He returned to England early in 1217 with almost eight hundred men-at-arms, four hundred archers and three hundred knights from mainly Maine and Poitou, along with two thousand urban militia from the Noyon, Limours and other towns in the Isle of France[6]. The journey across the Manche was perilous, as the Cinque Ports were of dubious loyalty and pirates from those ports and points north harassed the Capetian convoys, but as they were commanded by the mercenary Eustace the Monk it came to no avail. Amongst these knights was Amaury de Montfort, eldest son of Simon the Cathar-Slayer.
The Cathar-Slayer had a claim to land in England, the Earldom of Leicester. Half of the earldom had been seized by King John in 1207, and in 1215, at the request of the Pope the other half was given to Simon’s cousin Ranulf de Blondeville, Earl of Chester to hold for the use of Simon. The Montforts were known in England as argumentative figures in the law courts, challenging the details of inheritance, and as shadowy nobles at the Kings court. The sheer weight of the personal activities of Simon the Cathar-slayer changed how the Montforts were viewed by many Englishmen, but Amaury was treated with suspicion by the Boreales. Ranulf was one of the great Norman nobles of the age, and a solid supporter of King John, if only for the promises of further power that John gave during the Civil War. In 1216 John conferred upon him the titles of ‘Count palatine of Chester, Wrexham, Oswald’s Cross, Earl of Stafford’ making Ranulf the most powerful man in northern England.

Lewis knew this and so he initially sought to buy off de Blondeville. However de Blondeville was a cast iron supporter of King John, so he refused Lewis’s offers of alliance. With diplomacy extinguished, Lewis decided to break de Blondeville instead. His father, Philip II Augustus occupied Avranchin – between Normandy and Brittany -, which de Blondeville held as viscount. Avranchin was a valuable stronghold of castles and a supply of knightly vassals. This did not affect the Earl of Chester as much as was hoped by the Capets, so Lewis called upon the Montforts. If the Montfort family would provide knights and men-at-arms for the English campaign in 1217 then Philip and Lewis would give back the entirety of the Earldom of Leicester to the Montforts. Simon dispatched his eldest son Amaury to answer the Kings call and Amaury arrived at Rouen with an entourage of thirty knights, a hundred archers, and three hundred men-at-arms on the 14th of April, and he arrived in England shortly after, as he is recorded as being at the Parlement at London sixteen days later. These men were direct from the Albigensian Crusade in the Languedoc, battle hardened from fighting against the forces of Count Raymond VII. The absence of Amaury and the forces he commanded was felt in the Languedoc when Toulouse fell to Count Raymond VII in September [7], forcing Simon the Crusader to turn away from Foix and strike back at Toulouse. But he lacked adequate supplies and troops to siege the town, and was forced to regroup, and it would not be until September next year that Simon would be able to lay siege and take the city.
Peter of Dreux, regent of Brittany promised Lewis a force of two hundred knights, but his journey to England was delayed and he was not able to cross the Manche until April.

When the winter frost thawed the two forces engaged in war yet again. The organised French campaign in 1214 against the invading Plantagenet and Imperial armies was a rarity in the 13th Century: it had emerged in the face of a terrible emergency threatening Paris herself. John and Lewis both hoped to lead the same campaign, but both sides lacked the urgency and command. England was divided thusly: from Bristol in the west, north to Oxford, the Castle Donington, east to Lincoln and from there east to the coast. However, this line was merely a guideline, as behind the line there were pockets of Plantagenets and Boreales, and warfare was not constant along that line. Rather warfare was dependent upon castles and who controlled them. For example Marlborough castle was held by Lackland’s ally Hugh de Neville [8], and many of the northern castles along the Scottish Marches were under the control of Boreales. On the other side of the Marches was King Alexander II of Scotland, who was preparing another invasion to support King Lewis, to whom he had sworn fealty to in London a year earlier.

The constant warfare and quick movement of John’s army around England had taken its toll on the King. When he marched to Lincoln in May he was haggard and pale, and all the decisions of the state were handled by his high Justiciar of England, Archbishop Stephen Langdon of Canterbury, and the campaign against King Lewis was under the control of Falkes de Breaute, that great Norman knight.

de Breaute was determined that Lincoln would be the key to strike at Lewis and the Boreales. Once it fell control of the Midlands would be easy, and the Plantagenet’s could march to London. Lackland’s plan was to siege Lincoln quickly, whilst the Earl of Chester engaged the army of Lewis and the Boreales. However after setting out from London Lewis heard of the movements of the Earl of Chester into the Midlands he divided his army, sending Amaury Montfort and Hubert de Burgh to hold off the Earl of Chester.

Montfort and de Burgh arrived at Coventry on the 17th of May, and their force clashed with that of de Blondeville. However these were skirmishes, and the results were indecisive for either party. The Boreales seizure of Coventry was uncontested by the Plantagenets as de Blondeville was unsure as to the number of soldiers Montfort had at Coventry. de Blondeville decided to link his army with that of King John’s who had arrived at Lincoln on the 20th of May, and set siege to the castle. The castle had been regarrisoned over the winter, and now boasted a garrison of eight hundred. John made several attempts to seize the walls but the Plantagenet force was attacked with rocks and arrows.

The armies of the Plantagenets and Boreales marched across the Midlands towards Lincoln. When the army of King Lewis arrived in the Belvoir valley Falkes de Breaute advised John to break the siege and retreat to a defendable position. The Plantagenet army retreated north to Bolingbroke Castle. Bolingbroke was an old mort and baliey castle in need of repair, but it served as a rally point where the Plantagenets could regroup. The forces of King Lewis followed, arriving near Bolingbroke on the 3rd of June. Falkes de Breautel was determined not to be caught in siege. Both armies contained many Castellans, but the siege would only end in failure for the Plantagenet forces. Should the battle go in the favour of the Boreales then the Plantagenets could escape north to York easier than if they were caught in a siege.

Lackland moved the army out of Bolingbroke on the advice of Falkes de Breautel, and on the 10th of June the armies of John and Lewis met on the field of battle.

The Plantagenet army was commanded by at the centre by Lackland and Marshal, whilst de Blondevile commanded the left and William de Ferres, earl of Derby commanded the right wing. The Capetian army was commanded by Lewis himself, whilst he granted de Burgh the left and to Amaury Montfort, whose had arrived via Lincoln a day earlier, his army reinforced by knights from the Duke of Brittany, who had landed at Southampton on the 30th of May.

The battle itself was a fierce battle on both sides, as while the Boreales had larger numbers the Plantagenet army had better commanders, de Breautel especially. Lackland was undone not by a failure of troops or his poor grasp of strategy [9], but the treachery of the Earl of Chester. de Blondevile’s loyalty to King John was always shaky, but as John’s forces were outflanked by the Duke of Brittany’s knights de Blondevile decided to retreat, to save himself. His force of twelve hundred left the field of battle, leaving John further outnumbered. When de Blondevile left the mercenaries followed. The earl of Derby attempted to rally the remnants of de Blondevile’s left flank to charge directly at Lewis, but was beaten back by William de Burgh and Amaury de Montfort. After Derby’s attack was beaten back Lewis advanced his knights towards the dissolving centre of the Plantagenet line, and Falkes de Breautel and King John were captured.
Once the final forces of the Plantagenets had surrendered or fled the field Falkes de Breautel was executed.

John however was held prisoner by the Lewis, and transported to Lincoln. Lackland was ill, his body was wreaked with dysentery and so wounded from the scars of the battle that he did not last a week. According to Matthew Paris one night John called for a priest, was given his last rights.
And then he died. An ignoble death for an ignoble man.

Lewis planned to take Lackland back to Lincoln, to publicly execute him. His death in private was John’s last victory. So John’s body was taken back to London to be shown, before it was buried in an unmarked grave at Clerkenwell priory. John would rest at Clerkenwell for three centuries, before his body was dug up to lie at Fontevraud Abbey in Anjou alongside the remains of his brother and forefathers.

England had fallen out of the hands of the Plantagenet family. On the 5th of August Lewis was crowned King of England in London by the bishop of London [10] He had won his kingdom, now his duty was to maintain it.

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[1] The issue of escape to Ireland was raised IOTL, but since the war went better for the Plantagenets went better then TTL it was never taken up.

[2] IOTL the children of King John stayed in Chinon castle.

[3] That is the five legitimate children of King John.

[4] OTL readers would know this as the White Ship

[5] An OTL character

[6] A larger number then IOTL.

[7] Actually this happened IOTL anyway

[8] IOTL Lewis seized the castle in 1216, but because of a worse sieges at Windsor and Winchester the Capetian army never reached Marlborough in 1216.

[9] Although both certainly helped.

[10] William of Saint Mere Englise was from Manche in France. He was made bishop of London in 1198. As Stephen Langdon, the previous Archbishop of Canterbury was a Plantagenet supporter was absent the duty of crowning the King fell to the Bishop of London.
 
AS said, excellent.

Just one question : isn't ten just too young to be knighted?

plus a couple hairspliting :
+ motte and balley, not mort and balley ( though that makes intersting translation also - motte = small raise of earth, mort = death/dead - )
+ last rites, not last rights ( again, interesting if taken literally )
 
Excellent update Scarecrow. Now we move on from the taking of England to the ruling of it.

Thanks SK. Lewis's rule of England should be very interesting.

AS said, excellent.

Just one question : isn't ten just too young to be knighted?

plus a couple hairspliting :
+ motte and balley, not mort and balley ( though that makes intersting translation also - motte = small raise of earth, mort = death/dead - )
+ last rites, not last rights ( again, interesting if taken literally )

It happened to Henry IOTL a year earlier, as he was knighted and then crowned King of England after his fathers death, so I see no problem with it happening ITTL.

The hair splitting is duely note.
 
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